Elsie+Locke+2011

  __Monday 13 June 2011__

**Next Steps - Target** **Luke, this is a good start. Describe what is happening in the story rather than just listing events, elaborate on your ideas e.g. Deciding to leave home I ... Quickly stuffing my few belongings into a bag ... As night fell and darkness settled in**

“Dingo walks into house after school” Hey mum and there was no reply so Dingo walked around the house and then saw his mum lying on the ground all bruised and with black eyes. “Ding says” Who did this. Mum doesn’t say a word but Dingo knows that it was Bazil because I always see mum getting abused by Bazil and mum only stays with him because he put’s the food on the table. He abuses Dingo as well.

I made a react disceion to leave home and try to get out of this abusing life and get into a good crowd.

We quickly packed all my stuff I was thinking in my head should I go or stay. I got all the money I had and that $150 dollars. but went and ran out the door. Then I jocked down and I stopped in at Mc Donalds and got a chicken chomp. I was wondering if mum new I was gone yet, but i don’t think she did but she is probably getting betten up. After get Mc D’s I deiced to head from Tauranga to Te Puke, I don’t know why I thought to go to Te Puke I have never been there I’ve heard some great stories I think it was Te Puke not Pokekoi.

It was getting dark when I was walking to Te Puke, but a a hour later I saw the Te Puke sign, I thought yes this is a new beginning, but I saw all these mean tough looking men with patches on and all wearing one color and it was yellow so I thought no it was the killer bee’s.



            __Wednesday 18 May 2011__

<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px;">Main characters: Dingo 13 year old boy, Bazil Father, Ping Pong Mother.

<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px;">Theme: Family Drama, boy runs away from home.

<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px;">Plot: Dingo runs away from because bazil is abusing him and his mum. when dingo is on the run he blends in with the wrong crowd.

<span style="display: block; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; text-align: center;"> __Thursday 19 May 2011__ <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px;">“Dingo walks into house after school” Hey mum and there was no reply so Dingo walked around the house and then saw his mum lying on the ground all bruised and with black eyes. “Ding says” Who did this. Mum doesn’t say a word but Dingo knows that it was Bazil because I always see mum getting abused by Bazil and mum only stays with him because he put’s the food on the table. He abuses Dingo as well.

__Friday 20 May 2011__

We quickly packed all my stuff I was thinking in my head should I go or stay. I got all the money I had and that $150 dollars. but went and ran out the door. Then I jocked down and I stopped in at Mc Donalds and got a chicken chomp. I was wondering if mum new I was gone yet, but i don’t think she did but she is probably getting betten up. After get Mc D’s I deiced to head from Tauranga to Te Puke, I don’t know why I thought to go to Te Puke I have never been there I’ve heard some great stories I think it was Te Puke not Pokekoi.

__Monday 23 May 2011__

It was getting dark when I was walking to Te Puke, but a a hour later I saw the Te Puke sign, I thought yes this is a new biggining, but I saw all these mean tough looking men with patches on and all wearing one color and it was yellow so I thought no it was the killer bee’s.