T2+Explain

__Tuesday 7 June 2011__ How to solve a crime

There are many different types of crime like robberies and murder, so there is many different types and ways to solve a crime, but we will be focusing on robberies.

When a crime has been called in the police will firstly go to the scene of the crime and then they call in the scene of crime officers(SOC). The SOC are the people that walk through the crime with there hands in there pockets so they don’t disturb the evidence. They will then predict what they think happened so the can put the evidence together. They will then split up and one will take the inside and 1 will take the outside so they do it quicker and get more evidence. When they collect the evidence they will examine it by seeing who’s finger prints it was. Then they send it off to the lab for it to be properly examined.

When it gets to the lab they will test to see who’s finger prints or who’s blood it is. They test finger prints with a electronic finger printer reader, you put one of your fingers on the machine and it reads who’s it is. For blood they just do a DNA, DNA pretty much just means a type of blood. After the test they get suspect from them and they interview them.

This where the detectives step and interview the suspects witness and victims to see who’s telling the truth and get the full story. Most of the time it is hard to get the truth out of someone, so they sometimes get a lie detecter witch tell them if they lied or telled the truth the lied detecter is about 90% right. Then they will normally figure out the crime and get the criminal.

__Thursday 2 June 2011__

Conclusion: Our survey showed that most people like fantasy books like twilight, like wore wolfs. The results showed that they like books that have settings in the forrest and in the country or the forrest. According to my research 49% of people judge a book by its cover so we will really need a intriguing cover to catch the readers attention. The survey show that we 61% of people like it when the main characters are humans so we will probably need to make our main characters just humans. %64 of people like it when it is written in 3rd person, so we will need to probably do that the whole way through our story.

Recommendation: There were two good mates studying at university witch is a old and supposably haunted school. There have been many mysteries murders and things happen at the school especially at night. Bill and Barry were just walking out of school from a night class as they walked past the huge haunted tower they saw the light on with like a vampire up the top with a knife and then you could see something red was sprinting out in the tower. Then he saw us and steered us down we made react decision to sprint for safety just before we were going to run we saw the light turn off and that made us really run. We were running then....

__Thursday 19 May 2011__

Rugby League

Rugby league is a game like rugby with 13 players on the field and 4 players on the bench. The field is 100 meters big, therefore it is 50 meters wide with 5 meter in goal. The bench is when people don’t they are on the sideline, as in rugby league you get 12 interchange’s changing on and off.

In rugby league you get six tackles, when in rugby you get as many as you want. In league when you get tackled you play the ball under your league, but you must play it with your foot when you roll it back, when you tackle some one and the ref said held you must release and you can go make witch is when you got in front of the player that you tackled and someone else can go behind you, but you must be square.

In league you have numbers 1 to 17, one is a fullback and you stand behind your defense line. 2 is a winger when you are the furthest out to the side, they are normally fast people. 3 is centre with is inside the winger. 4 is the same as 3. 5 is a winger. 6 is a stand off and is the play maker. 7 is the same but than stand on the other side. 8 is a prop where the just hit it up. 9 is when the pass the ball of the ground when you play the ball. 10 is a prop. 11 is a second row where the stand a little winder than the prop and run up the guts. 12 is a second row. 13 is a lock where the stand on the fringe and go any where.

You can not pass ford in rugby league other wise it will be a scrum. You can not high tackle other wise you will be penalized. That means the get to kick for touch and get the ball back or tap and go or kick at goal and get 2 points. The points system is different to rugby its not 5 for a try not seven for a conversion or 3 points for a field goal. It is 4 points for a try and 2 points for a conversion witch is when you kick at the post from where you kicked from, but you go back as far as you want if you kick it over the post you get 2 points. A field goal is when you drop kick and it go’s over the post you get 1 point. You can get a 8 point try by

The big rugby league comp called the NRL is mostly aussie team with one New Zealand team. There are 16 teams in the comp. There are the NZ Warriors,WestTigers,Rabbitoes,Bulldogs,Roosters,Broncos,Storm,Cowboys,Sharks,Raiders,Panthers,Dragons,Titans,Knights,Sea Eagles and Eels. The New Zealand Kiwis are he world champions in league and the four nations champions.

Editing

In rugby league you get six tackles, when in rugby you get as many as you want. In league when you get tackled you play the ball under your leg, but you must play it with your foot when you roll it back, when you tackle some one and the ref says held you must release and you can go to the maker witch is when you go in front of the player that you tackled and someone else can go behind you, but you must be square.





 ﻿L.I. We are learning to use words that contain cause & effect.S.C. My writing 
 * will use words like because, as a result of, therefore

__Tuesday 10 May 2011__

 What is a earth quake?

A earth quake is a really frightening shake that occurs in the ground.

A recta scale is a type of measurement used for earth quake therefore they have number grades with the higher the worst. 2 to 4 is a minor earth quake, a 4 to 5 is quite a serious earth quake with most people will feel it in the area therefore a 5 to 7 is a very serious earth quake that most buildings will fall down and will likely create a earth quake.

A earth quake is created by two plates in the ground and then they clash at that sends a eruption that go’s up and that is when we feel it. The closer the plates clash to us the powerful and dangerous it can be

Luke who have used present tense like "is". Who have also used cause and effect words like "therefore". You could also make your general statement have a little bit more information. (James Green)

===**L.I. We are learning to use the structure of explain to give an explanation of what light is and to use present tense. ** === ===**S.C. My writing ** ===
 * has a general statement at the beginning
 * <span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">is sequenced in time order or clearly explains in a logical order
 * <span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">is written in present tense

<span style="font-size: 120%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; margin: 0px;">__ Wednesday 4 May 2011 __

<span style="display: block; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; text-align: center;"> LIGHT <span style="font: normal normal normal 14px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">Light is a visible and not a visible thing. Did you know that light can kill you.

<span style="font: normal normal normal 14px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">Light Reflects

<span style="font: normal normal normal 14px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">Light can reflect off many thing like mirrors and you can make a pathway with light. When you normally look at a reflection of light it shine your eyes because most of the vessels in your eyes never see light so when you look into the sun your sentive cells cause your eyes to hurt or water.